very nice! kinda reminds me of beauty and the beast in a way.

Confusing. I'll read it again.

Haha! I get it. It's cool. Yeah.

if a poem can be described as "trippy", that is most certainly what this is

Short yet an interesting and entertaining moment captured.

Too often when we are young our self esteem becomes so low we feel hideous over relatively small imperfections. Like a pimple that takes on the semblance of a huge erupting volcano or a front tooth that has fallen out making us feel we will look like a freak or monster in another’s eyes.

Nice write, brought me back to those younger memories of myself, made me smile and long for more.

Den

wow! I like it XD

interesting, kinda like the unveiling of a masked man who hides in the shadows for fear of showing his ravaged face, nice poem

wow...a bit confusing but enthralling. Very good! I loved it.

wow...confusing...but very interesting at the same time...hmm...

wicked

right on

live on the edge...