no u cant end it there! that was so cute!! i just love Mitch and Jason they r such a cute couple please continue

An excellent beggining!

Love, love, love, this story to pieces. Wish I knew more about Will Jordy but I love this story so very much. It was a very good read.

well i just wanted to say i read up to abt half of it, well specifically the chapter that mentions will jordy and then the whole thing just suddenly got too predictable and i skipped to the end and oh look, will jordy mentioned again. but up to that point i was enjoying it, well for a high school fic it was going good. and the writing style was cool too, how it was alot about how other people saw them.

I read the whole thing in what looks like 4 or 5 hours.
wow, I'll come back and actually review but for now WOW! cause my brain is dead...

LOVE IT. forever.

love the story

ah. the ending was SO FRICKIN ADORABLE. jason sorta changed from beginning to end

Holy jesus! This story was so ** awesome :D Like I loved it so much! And I love how real Jason and Mitchell are as characters. It's wonderful~ Um, I suck at reviews and can't say much else, but yeah! Loved it!

X3 hah, I loved Jason's closing line~

Considering the stories I usually read have a more central conflict, I actually really liked the sort of serial conflicts of this. Though I suppose you still had the main conflict of Jason's coming out etc. I also liked how you followed them through so many years, it was fun to watch them develop voer time.

Anyway, really sweet story with awesome characters^^

Wow. Mitch sure waited long to use that trick, didn't he? I kinda expected him to do it way earlier…
Well. I really like how I get to know more and more aspects of the characters as the story progresses, like their skin tone and stuff XD

could i love a story as much as i love the-is one?

nope nope and nope

~ari

hes got a gap in his teeth>? >.< how big is said gap?! oh gosh i hope hes still hot, argh its killing my image of him. by the way, really enjoying the story so far.

aggh i loved this so much. Your characters are believeable, loveable (ESPECIALLY Will Jordy!) and i think you conveyed everything very well. Can't decide whether Jason or Mitchell is my favourite, though :)

Great story, I loved it. ^_^ Very well put together. Thanks for writing.

-Emerald-