Hey, who's the shadow? Just kidding! Another rhym-ish one, good job so far! Keep it up!

Wow, this poem is WONDERFUL! And expresses the way I feel about SO many people! This is going on my favorite stories! I loved it, babe, and you can tell it come from the heart. I love you and if EVER I have a bad day and treat you like this, please tell me - because I never want you to be in my shadow, I'd much rather have you at my side.

One Question: Whose shadow? Otherwise good work. As always. ~ Alexz Lynn

Powerful and passionate, I can feel the strength that you posses underneath your words.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

i really liked it lots of imagery its good