Hmm... I found this story quite amusing. I had just read Macbeth in my English 12 class...and I hated it. I liked the end of the story. I like how you had references to Macbeth. Anyway...my overall review of this, very good story.

Oh I love this, I know exactly how you feel. I played Miranda in the Tempest when I was in high school, I felt the same way.I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.