Hey, when are you going to write more?! I've been waiting, this story is to god to drop. Give me an e-mail at skinnymikemaine@aol.com.

This was a good chapter. You were right about how keeping a character's past in the dark makes the story more interesting. Also, what are the alchemists in your story capable of?

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Hey Louise! It's me, Caitlin! I LOVE your story. I think the best thing about it is that it creates another world that people can live in. I bet practically everyone who reads this story will imagine themselves as an Alchemist Bound to a strong noble or a strong noble Bound to a powerful Alchemist. That's what people like--another world. Very awesome!!

I just read the rest of the chapters. I really like them, especially the imagery. The intervening chapters with Merrik are intruiging- are you going to make him a main character? I also like the way you slowly reveal the history of Alchemy and alchemists. I don't understand why exactly they let themselves be bound, but the mystery just makes me want to keep reading!

It's not that your story is long, its just that it surprised me when you threw out eight chapters at once. Having something this long already written is amazing though. How long did it take you to write it?

You wrote a good chapter, and though I'd hate to ask, but could you drop a reveiw by my story, 'Tales of Chrysalis'

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Good chapter, though it was a bit shorter than the last.

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Good chapter, though you might want to the second 'visible' in the second sentence of the second paragraph. It sounds awkward. Its not that important though.

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This was a well-written chapter, and I'm running out of compliments to tell you.

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Good chapter. You definitaly have a handle on this story.

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So that what being 'bound' is. Interesting. I have to ask how you got the idea for this.

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You definitally have a tallent for illustrating Liana's feelings in your writing. I can really inderstand her very well.

Good chapter, seeya later

Very good opening. I've only had time to read chapter one, but I am already intrigued. Can't wait to read the rest!

How in the heck did you manage to write eight chapters in one night! It might take a while, but I'll read through all of the new chapters by tonight. You wrote his chapter very well, but I don't understand just what being 'bound' means. Please continue soon.

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This story has an intriguing plot and is very descriptive. I hope that you continue this work very soon.

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