WOW! that sounds like a very similar siuation that im going through

Listen to your mind. Man oh man, you sure are a brutal read.

Again that quote from my other review lingers in my mind. But about the last line it leaves a question...WHY?

cute

A very good portrayl of new love and lost love, you did a good job of capturing them. There's plenty of conflict in it, conflict we all face

That's a really good poem. Very sad/emotionial. I like it, Keep reading.