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mel62 6/21/06 . chapter 1You've certainly upped the story count since the last time I reviewed. You're still, writing with the same quality standard I remember. The poem is good. Though I'd change new to knew as the context you're writing it in new isn't right. Other than that it's a sad poem which conveys the shock and the pain and I'd say anger, though that doesn't really seem to come across as strongly, really well. |
sweetxinsincerity 3/17/05 . chapter 1great job, i really like it |