this is nice. true that love and jealousy dont mix well but when there's love, there's jealousy.

I liked this. Diego and I are over, yeah it sucks, but I'll move on. xoxo Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy

it's hard to make someone believe that you're not lying...and as for love and jealousy, even though they aren't good to mix, they come hand in hand

I swear some people are blind, or just to assumptions to quick. This was well written and you portrayed the idea well. Keep it up, you improve alot. It's wierd, if you need proof read the first thing I posted, (a year ago) and compare to what you've read now. It's wierd, though i still suck. But this review isn't bout me, it's about you and all your greatness.

I thought that was an interesting concept, but I think you should organize the poem into stanzas. Good start!

I like the rhyming. You wrote a lot of poems about love...is you girlfriend angry at you or something?