| Reviews for Poker Game |
|---|
this is britt 3/6/05 . chapter 1the allusion is wonderful. |
Made in U.S.A 3/6/05 . chapter 1good title, good repetition, good work and blah i have nothing interesting to say. you know that you're good so keep writing. |
Snowing Outside 3/4/05 . chapter 1Wow, you are an amazing writer; it's inspiring to read all of your poetry! I guess this is just a general comment for everything, because I really can't find anything wrong with this poem. Beautifully put, and short. Nice. |
beti213 3/3/05 . chapter 1Hah! I love the oblique poker metaphor (I didn't read the title at first, so it was oblique for a bit there) I think you could maybe use more description, to supplement the cool phrasing... nice work |