|Reviews for Poker Game|
| this is britt 3/6/05 . chapter 1
the allusion is wonderful.
| Made in U.S.A 3/6/05 . chapter 1
good title, good repetition, good work and blah i have nothing interesting to say. you know that you're good so keep writing.
| Snowing Outside 3/4/05 . chapter 1
Wow, you are an amazing writer; it's inspiring to read all of your poetry! I guess this is just a general comment for everything, because I really can't find anything wrong with this poem. Beautifully put, and short. Nice.
| beti213 3/3/05 . chapter 1
Hah! I love the oblique poker metaphor (I didn't read the title at first, so it was oblique for a bit there) I think you could maybe use more description, to supplement the cool phrasing... nice work