A beautiful poem for its imagery. It really encapsulates the poor veiws of anorectics worldwide. 'Punishment rations' - Superb! Honestly, a lovely poem. However, I'm quite sure the fourth line should have a question mark after it, so it reads:

On punishment rations?

Just my grammar-nazi alterego rearing her ugly head.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]

interesting. it kind of distorted my perception for a minute. black bread and water does oddly sound pleasing right now.

This sounds so kissass but you are the best. This is short but hits you hard you know? just beautiful. keep writing :D