Interesting structure. The ultimate question acts as a sort of miniature chorus, bringing the central idea back into focus before every stanza.

Wonderfully written, the emotions seemed heartfelt, the line being bold also added to the poem.

Keep it up.

i like the repetition there - i have one similar, but reversed - how could he love me? good job.

Han.

i loved reading hthis poem, and i liked the effect casted, when you kept repeating "why do i bother loving you?"

I really love this, I can relate.

Great job! Really.

Much love,

Rosanna.

lol... i relate so well to that...

This was wonderful! I loved the way the words flow and i just loved what you were saying it was kinda sad, but i loved it none the less.