Wow! That's really good. I especially like the line describing the eyes, I think it had good imagery.Keep on writing! (btw-it's christian)

This is really good, one of the best sonnets that I've read that wasn't by the great Shakespeare himself. I really loved the line about how her cheek reminded you of a summer's breeze. That really set a beautiful and powerful mood in my mind.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.