I really like this piece. It's short, and kinda dark. I like the idea of 'silent screams'. Only thing I have to say, is that in the title for this piece, you might want to add a 'c' in there. Right now, it's only 'Silent Sreams'.

Congrats on 1st place for RM July, sorry for the lateness

Caecilia

Touching, great flow. Keep up the awesome work.

Wow, this i really like.

If I didnt know better, I would swear you knew me. Great poem

Elli

wow, powerful. sorry in advance if my reviews are crappy, kinda not in the mood.

so sad. I hope people start to notic the little things too. sorry im so behind on reviews!

I can relate to this very well, its a simple poem that it filled with emotions.

Keep it up.

Reminds me of the song I wrote for a friend of mine. Awesome haiku, I can relate.

Much love,

Rosanna.

Even though it's not a haiku...it's still good. I especially like the idea of "silent screams" nice job!

;; Now this is brillant. Honest and touching. :P Great job on this. A great haiku. :)

!* Noelle *!

i like it too. great job

lifes been busy, srry i havent reveiwed in ages

alwaysFTT

beautifully describing a broken misunderstoof fearful girl.i can relate. wonderful man.

This is great. Its short, but meaningful. Great job! :) Its one of my favorites.

Applescm

I like that short and simple :-) great job

beautiful. I can feel the girl's sense of hopelessness and anguish.