I absolutely love the metaphoric imagery in this one. Just vague enough to add emotion, but concrete enough to paint pictures. Thanks for your review; I don't have your email, so I'll just explain it here: go to w.magneticpoetry.com and look at their online store under the "Voices" category. You can also play with the Gardener kit online (look for the green button on the right of the home page).

Yeah, I've also told you what I think of this one, but I'll say it again. I absolutely love this one! It is one of those things where you read it and you're like, dang...I wish I wrote that... exquisite job!

~Hip