Brillant... Emotions are clear .. wonderful

Another good piece. The only thing I could say against it, and this is purely a matter of opinion, is the verse, "Stuck to me like glue". I just think the word glue doesn't fit well with the rest of the poem, it kind of breaks the rythm. But still you did a great job!

somewhat sad; anyways this was ok, not one of your best poems but nevertheless, goof job.-ADD

The rhyme is very well done, it is very passionate. Having it be to no one inperticual was a good plan. Good job Jeannette

Hm...Perhaps this was directed towards your theater class? You can really get a sense of the loathing and disgust. Nice job.

o' how that sounds familiar lol great job on this poem