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| alicesun 2005-04-27 ch 1,  | abusewhat a mysterious, tense piece!talk about sucking you in.amazing work, stormer. truly amazing |
| Jord 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, brilliant job. You did yourself proud with this piece. It feels so real and honest - you didn't try to play with the readers by writing down trite words that invoke sympathy. Instead you performed, and you did it well! |
| Fudge-Sicle 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was very interesting! I liked how you used first person so well! I really enjoyed seeing how her mind worked. Interesting. Keep up the good work! |