Now this one I liked a lot. It has potential, that last bit on the second chapter made me giggle a lot.

Oh yeah, and watch out for silly spelling mistakes, you're probably typing too fast and didn't notice the "form" instead of "from"... the "urn" instead of "run"... sorry, I know, I'm picky.

I really did enjoy this though, I might prod you until you start writing more. So get to it, it's really got potential to be a really good story. Now, get writing Miss Mari.

Great story so far, ill keep it in fave to keep track of this story of yours and all your works ^^'

I like this story so far, and I love the way you describe things and how Arianna meets her neighbor with the poker. The only thing I found was that when you give ownership to someone, you need "my aunt's house" instead of "aunts" so that it shows possession.