I like this poem. Good job.

Xavier

That was beautiful! I completely fell in love with the ending! It gave the whole poem some kind of twist.

awesome

Powerful, intense, and brilliantly emotional. Can't say much more than that.

I like the message, those last two lines, it's just so true that things like that always fall vack on ourselves most of all. Great poem.

I'd see whay it is a personal favorite. ^-^ This is so very powerful. I love it. ^-^ Beautiful job, a powerful feel in every word. ^-^ Great job!!

!~* Noelle *~!