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| Johnyy Blackkk 2005-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseBravo... |
| xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis definitely was a brilliant poem, and the last stanza was a genius conclusion to this wonderful poem. I liked how you used an acronym to spell out the word faded, and that word really describes the feel of this poem so perfectly. The flow was especially nice on this one, and I liked the way your formatted the poem. Definitely a wonderful addition to your collection of poetry. chibichocobo |
| Rosanna28 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAnother amazing poem. I can't so more about it, I'm just in a lack of words right now. Much love, Rosanna. |
| MaHaLLz 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis reminds me of a story my friend wrote once. but, this was a very beautiful piece. great job! |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abusewow.. very powerful adn well written |
| Diascia 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. Just simple and plain. -Loved- it. |