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CakeForEveryone
2006-06-09
ch 3,
aw there was so many cute scenes in this chapter i love it great job!!
CakeForEveryone
2006-06-09
ch 2,
o whats gonna happen?
CakeForEveryone
2006-06-09
ch 1,
like it so far
WordsKingdoms
2006-03-27
ch 3,
My mouth was twitching through all three chapters. Very amusing, though I'll have to remember not to read it in class for fear of laughing outloud XD Hope you update soon!!
GossamerHeart
2005-08-21
ch 3,
Yes! Completely awesome! I'm in a Forensic League team too -- I do basically anything that comes my way, but I'm an original girl. The format of the competition isn't exactly like ours -- I have no idea what a power round is -- but it's obvious that it's a public speaking competition. This is turning out to be great!-Summer Goose
ArchAngelic the Reborn
2005-08-17
ch 3,
It was pretty obvious from chapter one that your were Nyki...Anyway, I do like it. It is interesting, and I'm curious about what he saw when he got home.

But I think the sexual tension between Eamon and Shawn could have been written in bright pink neon letters...they seem a little too much like a couple...

And what was with that Thai guy anyway? He was weird...

Anyway, I've put you on my alert list since I want to know how things will develop SO UPDATE SOON
Widom
2005-06-17
ch 3,
*feels special for little or no reason* Ah, nice chapter...Thai, like Thai tea? Hahaha, I like him and his perverted acrobatics already. I am amazed that your characters are all based off of real people...most real people aren't interesting enough to deserve their own story, but fine. Kentucky? Sadness...I will miss you. But then, I will have done something progressive by the 28th, so I guess it's okay. Good luck with chapter 4!
Widom
2005-06-13
ch 2,
HAHAHAHA...the second chapter that I have been waiting over a month for! Mwahaha. I don't know how I missed this getting UPDATED *joy* but I'm glad you did.

Anyway, before I start getting really off-track, I should tell you that I love this. Not much has happened, really, but this is only the second chapter, and I am very, very curious about Mystery Boy. And I love Shawn. Don't know why.

An excellent second chapter.
Skyla Moon
2005-05-18
ch 2,
Yay forensics!! I'm in poetry, myself. This is interesting. And responding to your comment after the first chapter... geez, females have no place in a yaoi fic! Hehe.
M L
2005-05-12
ch 2,
^^ Write more.
princess max
2005-05-02
ch 2,
Yay, you've updated!!

'“You wouldn’t look good with one.”'

Awesome.
Eddie
2005-04-30
ch 2,
OMGE!! WRITE MORE NOW! :D I'M LURVES IT!! -clingy- need..e_e more..
translusantbutterfly
2005-04-25
ch 1,
it was graet! please update quick! your very good with discription!
Widom
2005-04-23
ch 1,
I love you SO much...nice start, no, better than nice, and I love all of your characters. You sneaky little person you, I notice that one of your characters has your name...tee hee. Makes my life better. And becuase I must comment out of my little realm...thank you so much for reviewing all of my nonsense. Means the world to me. *beams*
fbarlolken
2005-04-20
ch 1,
Naah, it's good. Do continue.

Nothing much else to say, beginning and all. I leave crap reviews regardless. >.
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