I like the characters so much, Shawn is adorable, how can he not tell Eamon is feeling something for him. Thai is mysterious but so far so good; looking forward to the rest

i like the story so far, hope you update soon!! =]

Oh my gosh! pleaze continue! I want to see what happens!!
I want to know if he goes with Thai! He sounds so hot.

wow,I just found this story today...and i fell in love with it...
~jess

Aw, Eamon and Shawn are cute. Oh, and this is the first time I've come across the name Eamon. :B Anyway, I think this story has some real potential. I can't say too much about it yet, since it was only 4 chapters. I do like it so far though. Update if you can!

aw there was so many cute scenes in this chapter i love it great job!!

o whats gonna happen?

like it so far

My mouth was twitching through all three chapters. Very amusing, though I'll have to remember not to read it in class for fear of laughing outloud XD Hope you update soon!!

Yes! Completely awesome! I'm in a Forensic League team too -- I do basically anything that comes my way, but I'm an original girl. The format of the competition isn't exactly like ours -- I have no idea what a power round is -- but it's obvious that it's a public speaking competition. This is turning out to be great!-Summer Goose

It was pretty obvious from chapter one that your were Nyki...Anyway, I do like it. It is interesting, and I'm curious about what he saw when he got home.

But I think the sexual tension between Eamon and Shawn could have been written in bright pink neon letters...they seem a little too much like a couple...

And what was with that Thai guy anyway? He was weird...

Anyway, I've put you on my alert list since I want to know how things will develop SO UPDATE SOON

*feels special for little or no reason* Ah, nice chapter...Thai, like Thai tea? Hahaha, I like him and his perverted acrobatics already. I am amazed that your characters are all based off of real people...most real people aren't interesting enough to deserve their own story, but fine. Kentucky? Sadness...I will miss you. But then, I will have done something progressive by the 28th, so I guess it's okay. Good luck with chapter 4!

HAHAHAHA...the second chapter that I have been waiting over a month for! Mwahaha. I don't know how I missed this getting UPDATED *joy* but I'm glad you did.

Anyway, before I start getting really off-track, I should tell you that I love this. Not much has happened, really, but this is only the second chapter, and I am very, very curious about Mystery Boy. And I love Shawn. Don't know why.

An excellent second chapter.

Yay forensics!! I'm in poetry, myself. This is interesting. And responding to your comment after the first chapter... geez, females have no place in a yaoi fic! Hehe.

^^ Write more.