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| CakeForEveryone 2006-06-09 ch 3, | aw there was so many cute scenes in this chapter i love it great job!! |
| CakeForEveryone 2006-06-09 ch 2, | o whats gonna happen? |
| CakeForEveryone 2006-06-09 ch 1, | like it so far |
| WordsKingdoms 2006-03-27 ch 3, | My mouth was twitching through all three chapters. Very amusing, though I'll have to remember not to read it in class for fear of laughing outloud XD Hope you update soon!! |
| GossamerHeart 2005-08-21 ch 3, | Yes! Completely awesome! I'm in a Forensic League team too -- I do basically anything that comes my way, but I'm an original girl. The format of the competition isn't exactly like ours -- I have no idea what a power round is -- but it's obvious that it's a public speaking competition. This is turning out to be great!-Summer Goose |
| ArchAngelic the Reborn 2005-08-17 ch 3, | It was pretty obvious from chapter one that your were Nyki...Anyway, I do like it. It is interesting, and I'm curious about what he saw when he got home. But I think the sexual tension between Eamon and Shawn could have been written in bright pink neon letters...they seem a little too much like a couple... And what was with that Thai guy anyway? He was weird... Anyway, I've put you on my alert list since I want to know how things will develop SO UPDATE SOON |
| Widom 2005-06-17 ch 3, | *feels special for little or no reason* Ah, nice chapter...Thai, like Thai tea? Hahaha, I like him and his perverted acrobatics already. I am amazed that your characters are all based off of real people...most real people aren't interesting enough to deserve their own story, but fine. Kentucky? Sadness...I will miss you. But then, I will have done something progressive by the 28th, so I guess it's okay. Good luck with chapter 4! |
| Widom 2005-06-13 ch 2, | HAHAHAHA...the second chapter that I have been waiting over a month for! Mwahaha. I don't know how I missed this getting UPDATED *joy* but I'm glad you did. Anyway, before I start getting really off-track, I should tell you that I love this. Not much has happened, really, but this is only the second chapter, and I am very, very curious about Mystery Boy. And I love Shawn. Don't know why. An excellent second chapter. |
| Skyla Moon 2005-05-18 ch 2, | Yay forensics!! I'm in poetry, myself. This is interesting. And responding to your comment after the first chapter... geez, females have no place in a yaoi fic! Hehe. |
| M L 2005-05-12 ch 2, | ^^ Write more. |
| princess max 2005-05-02 ch 2, | Yay, you've updated!! '“You wouldn’t look good with one.”' Awesome. |
| Eddie 2005-04-30 ch 2, | OMGE!! WRITE MORE NOW! :D I'M LURVES IT!! -clingy- need..e_e more.. |
| translusantbutterfly 2005-04-25 ch 1, | it was graet! please update quick! your very good with discription! |
| Widom 2005-04-23 ch 1, | I love you SO much...nice start, no, better than nice, and I love all of your characters. You sneaky little person you, I notice that one of your characters has your name...tee hee. Makes my life better. And becuase I must comment out of my little realm...thank you so much for reviewing all of my nonsense. Means the world to me. *beams* |
| fbarlolken 2005-04-20 ch 1, | Naah, it's good. Do continue. Nothing much else to say, beginning and all. I leave crap reviews regardless. >. |