Great story,keep up the good was long indeed but more things to Krystallis sees improvement.

I Love it I love it I love it!1 Please finish it!

I like it! SOrry I haven't reviwed your stuff in forever! It's very sad, but cool. I'll go and read your other stuff now.

I actually really like this. The only thing that I would change is the abrupt ending. The visual images and discriptiveness are beautiful.

much love,roberta

Wow...thats um kewlies?

hey you -

this definatly was beautiful. the imagery that you use is fantastico.

Wow! alot of emotions mixed up in that. Good work.

aww the poor little boy seeing his parents brutily killed:'( Is the older teen him? He sounds like a really cool guy, please update soon i cant wait to see what the future holds in store for him:) D.A