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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-21 ch 1,   | You have a gift of unraveling a story in a poem. I love how you sent this girl from wanting popularity and finding out that it wasnt all that big... to finding new life. I mean who can compare popularity with a new spirit. Great write. You have talent... keep up the god work. |
| Adonia Chesser 2005-03-21 ch 1, | I also like this one to, keep up the good work. |
| ... 2005-03-05 ch 1, | sweet and reflective poem, i like the honesty intertwined in the poem. great job! |
| saeo 2005-03-04 ch 1, | Aww...that's wonderful... Such a warm poem, and I especially like the rythym. The last stanza is so sentimental, so sweet, I loved it! This really is a great piece of writing! It's amazing how a pice of writing can be so joyful yet so sad all at the same time. Great job! ~Always, saeo |