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| Faded Servility 2005-03-13 ch 1,   | Interesting... I love some lines, others don't seem to fit as well. The ending doesn't seem complete, like you think there should be more. Don't get me wrong, I love the poem, Curtains still hung, shining still is the sun. Nothing has changed since you’ve gone. Nothing’s been better, there’s nothing you’ve done. I feel cheated, the short stick I’ve drawn., one of my favorite lines. ^_^ |
| Mistress of Eternity 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Wow, that's so sweet ^_^ I loved it!! Although you could work on the flow of the poem, it really is very good ^_^ Thanks so much for your reviews and suggestions and for taking the time to read my poems, you don't know how much that means to me!! For now, I'm on a little writer's block. I haven't written anything in a while, my life is not inspiring me, but rather confusing me. I hope that all changes soon!! Lots of love, Anna ^_^ |
| Mynix 2005-03-04 ch 1, | BEAUTIFUL! LOVE IT |