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| euphorix 2005-12-21 ch 1,   | aw how sweet! if thats based on ur real prom im sure u had a great night. |
| Vandagirl 2005-05-30 ch 1, | It doesn't suck! It was really sweet! ^_^ I loved it! There were a few typos, and it would be helpful if you made a new paragraph everytime someone new spoke, but those little things don't ruin the story. Once again, nice little one-shot, and... yeah. I think that's it. ~Vandagirl ^_^ |