Other than the fact the 'You" should be capitalized because you're refering to God, good job on this. Keep it up.

I can't really say more then I have in the previous two reviews I left. This is a prayer I know many pray. Open, honest, well worded, and incredibly longing.

This is an absolutely fabulous poem. It really expresses an emotion that I have felt sometimes. Keep on writing!

awesome poem, very honest and reflective. great job!