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| Aslan Israel 2005-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseOther than the fact the 'You" should be capitalized because you're refering to God, good job on this. Keep it up. |
| Getuie 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI can't really say more then I have in the previous two reviews I left. This is a prayer I know many pray. Open, honest, well worded, and incredibly longing. |
| Lara Bykirk 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is an absolutely fabulous poem. It really expresses an emotion that I have felt sometimes. Keep on writing! |
| ... 2005-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome poem, very honest and reflective. great job! |