Reviews for Why Can't I try - FictionPress.com

sav3dbygrac3 2005-04-10 ch 1,	o this is lovely. lovely.. wow, i've never used that word b4. XD still, again, great poem!!
Aslan Israel 2005-03-08 ch 1,	Wow. This I can really relate to. Cry out to God and just not seeming to do more than that even though you want to... Good job on this.
Needa S 2005-03-07 ch 1,	Sorry, I didn't sign-in Im lazy today. ^^ I sent ya an invite to our new site. Hope to see ya soon. Heartfelt piece. Awesome write. Thanks for the review.
Getuie 2005-03-06 ch 1,	The openness in this is the thing that struck me most. It is a piece I can relate too, especially from the last few years where I really had to find my identity in Christ and the decision to mould myself to that as opposed to the general things in which one would find some kind of existence. The road can be such a scary one... But with each question asked, we just simply draw nearer to God. It is in the fact that we question and the fact that we long for Father to provide those answers that we learn more about the journey instead of just cruising through it. And it's wonderful to discover Him throughout. Strength and Blessings
Amy Zincalo 2005-03-06 ch 1,	That was very sweet. I liked the way how you called Him daddy.
... 2005-03-05 ch 1,	beautiful poem, has a very natural feel, i applaud you for putting your faith in your writing, keep up the great work!