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| Sky Inlucy 2005-05-06 ch 3,   | what the hell. stop being an amazing writer. |
| rodeoclown 2005-05-03 ch 3, | Good chapter. It helped flesh out aspects of the characters...I especially loved the Arthur/River interaction...more please! |
| One Desire 2005-04-29 ch 3, | Lovely chapter, darling. I especially like the somewhat confusing bond between River and November. |
| rodeoclown 2005-04-23 ch 2, | So many interesting characters! Please keep it up! I want to know what happens to them! |
| One Desire 2005-04-23 ch 2, | Even though I've somewhat already reviewed this, I dearly loved it. But I do believe I saw some forgotten prepositions. |
| SleepDontWeep 2005-03-24 ch 1, | its so strange how differently u lyk dis... iim really enjoyin it.. i love der names... so original!anyways plz update this its dedly! so unique! and extremly descriptive !! drop me and review and tell me how u r.. and if u lyk my story... love u x |
| freedman121 2005-03-13 ch 1, | :shrug: I like it! |
| One Desire 2005-03-09 ch 1, | Brilliant! Richey Edwards! I take it you like Manic Street Preachers? I personally love them. |
| Mass Descent 2005-03-06 ch 1, | this is interesting. i'm excited. and thanks for reading my story (again.) this is just a msg/one line review. i liked when you didn't use quotations- even though it was confusing. in world lit class, we read this book by Clarice Lispector called "hour of the star" and all the words just use dashes and no quotations. it reminded me of your story a lot. as far as music goes- (profile)- yes thank god for music. Hey, download some 'Tegan and Sara' i think you would really like them! |