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| cling peach 2006-01-13 ch 1, | First of all, I just LOVE your penname. Hilarious. Second, I love your poem! "I'm as cold as the moon" is a great line, really expresses the feeling. The message is awesome, too. And the whole thing has a really good flow. Awesome work, keep it up! ^_^ |
| Atephobic 2005-10-04 ch 1, | "I envy all everyoneBut I don't wanna dieSo I cling to my hatredIt burns so fast inside" Sounds like a lot of people I know. |
| Spiral Artist 2005-07-18 ch 1, | Hatred towards the lie, seems even more furious when the truth rests with you. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-20 ch 1, | thats captured so beautifully! i know those feelings so well ;) |
| The Dark Fairie 2005-03-07 ch 1, | This is awesome! As always, I absolutely love it...haven't heard from you in a while. Luv ya!{jess} |
| Spleeny 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Wow, this is one of my favorite things you've written. You made so many good points I agree with. It's ** beautiful. |