Reviews for A sweet adieu - FictionPress.com

Emmouse 2005-03-05 ch 1,	it simple with a fantastic message. I like it :D
laughter at the funeral 2005-03-05 ch 1,	the metaphors are really good...but the second line is quite bugging me...i know it has a cetain style that's why it's in that form...but it sounds a bit awkward...i would've liked it better if it was strange isn't it?...oh and pls...if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems...thanks... truly yours...