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| laughter at the funeral 2006-05-01 ch 1, | wow, i really like the imagery...although i was quite bothered by the grammatical errors...it should be if the world "was" and i think saying that no sister "lives exist" is redundant...still a good job, and thanks for the review... truly yours... |
| MedNez 2005-04-29 ch 1, | :O Wow, it's so true, I like it :) |
| Stories-have-souls 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Lovely imagery. A good poem. |