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| AmberAmbushed 2008-09-12 ch 1,   | I wanted to read this poem initially because it has the same name as my story. lol. I really like it, it just flows extremely well. I especially liked the last line, "And the fairies left, in flight, Ripples on the stream." Great poem. |
| Darkrayne451 2005-04-01 ch 1, | I loved the rhyming scheme. And once again awsome ! |
| and calliope said 2005-03-26 ch 1, | Strong image. I want to be a fairy!Kudos! |
| The Lonely Vampire 2005-03-24 ch 1, | Dveyoni, yes. ^^ That's pretty much it. Night is so romantic. And overused in my writings. So. Uhm. Never mind. oO |
| Dveyoni 2005-03-24 ch 1, | Tell me if I am right this is depicting(spelling) what happens in that short time between day and night, and night and day? |
| jainen-black 2005-03-07 ch 1, | i like its rythem a couple words i would proably change but still it good keep writing |
| HideAwayFairy 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Very nice, I love it, especially the last line. |