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| and calliope said 2005-03-26 ch 1, | In love with the last two lines. |
| Dveyoni 2005-03-24 ch 1, | Like I said before you are wonderful at poems ( or thats what I had ment) |
| Ahemait 2005-03-07 ch 1, | wow, that's realy good. the rhymes were excellent (you spent a WEEK on a poem??!! i think i'd die) but i guess it paid off, this was great. awesome job! |
| Sekhmet Johnson 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Brilliant, brilliant! You're very good at writing. -nods- this goes on my favourites. |
| HideAwayFairy 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Whoa, wicked. At first it reminded me of the forest spirit from Princess Mononoke, but then I came up with a diff image. Very nice work! |
| Shivirani 2005-03-05 ch 1, | I agree with you about the last two lines. They seem a bit strange compared to the rest of the poem, but they're still great. |