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| Raving Blackbird 2005-03-07 ch 1, | Aww. It should be continued... It should it should. Your dialogues are wonderful. |
| sagenitewolf 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Too short, but I am intrigued. I really don't understand what's going on other than Mary is a maid of an immortal being. Keep writing. I wish you luck! |