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Reviews For: The World, some assembly required

Sekhmet Johnson
2005-03-25
ch 1,
-My ego is swelling. Thank you for the mention on your profile.. -

I like this paragraph the best. 'The fate of the world now rested in the five-year-old’s sweaty hands, the same hands that had recently groped in vast puddles of mud and even more recently pressed into the doughy crust of a warm slice of pizza… but now Billy was on to better things…'

Power to billy bob!!

and WRITE ON!!sunnee
scarlet-pictures
2005-03-12
ch 1,
Ohh... me likies! This is a great story. Very short, but it's not missing anything really.
Whooooooooo. o.o;;
2005-03-06
ch 1,
I luffed it. ^-^ Keep writin', even if it's superly short!
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