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| idoidoido 2005-07-30 ch 9, | good chapter. am waiting to know more about the story.maybe Alishia transform her friends into mermaids ? |
| GotinksX 2005-03-31 ch 8, | Hey I liked all of the other chapters but i'd have to say this was one of the longest chapters. It's still good though. The girl from the sea rocks! |
| Draia-Rodahi 2005-03-28 ch 7, | Hrmm... I'm not a supporter of near death experiences, but I guess there needed to be a way for the story to continue. |
| Draia-Rodahi 2005-03-21 ch 6, | Wow. Just like that: dead. Talk out freaking out anyone who come across her o.o It's not a bad story, but I don't know where you are going with this now that she's dead. |
| LogicalDreamer 2005-03-20 ch 6, | Absolutely loved it |
| GotinksX 2005-03-20 ch 6, | What i have read so far is nice. Good writing update again soon. Don't forget to check out some of my work. |
| GotinksX 2005-03-20 ch 1, | Nice length for a story. Check out some of my works. |