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| Leina 2006-01-02 ch 1, | Wow. Jeez, I can't believe I hadn't read this before! I've seen it here, but I never got around to reading it. I'm glad I finally did though! I thought you did a wonderful job. I'm really bad at poetry...or at least I am now. I'm happy to see that you have a talent for it though! *waves flag for you* It was awfully depressing, but strangely sweet at the same time. You were able to capture the emotions so well. |
| EternalBliss890 2005-09-06 ch 1, | That is so pretty, and so sad. I really like it. Never knew you could write so beautifully. |
| Tricky_Rabbit 2005-06-03 ch 1, | Hey, hun! That was really good! And you should know I love all your stories on fanfiction.net! How can a writer be this awesome? Hope to see you update again! I would really like to hear more! -tricky |
| Me 2005-03-23 ch 1, | Omg, that was so sad. It made me feel so much T_T you're such a good writer, both in stories and poems, keep it up =) you roch teh world^^ Please update Broken Wings and Dating a Diva soon, I'm really impatient. |
| Spinel Sun 2005-03-18 ch 1, | Sugoi! I can't even decribe it it was wonderful! Well... I mean how well it was written not what it was about (Which was very deep by the way!)! *Glomps* Keep it up! XD |
| Kupoo 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Um, yea, so, this person fell in love with an abuser? Weird. But what an amazing poem! ^_% Seriously that is super. If it does not go into the collage I'll break your fingers so you shall never write again. ;) More awesome than anything I could ever write. =) It's so... poetic. And perfect. Yea... lovely (pun intended!) |
| spinel sun 2005-03-10 ch 1, | Fwe! Very awesome poem Misty! ^^ Keep up writing poetry! |
| DementedOracle 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Woah. This is really long. And good. And. . .long, but very good. Yeah, I know, redundance and all that. Wow. I'm lost for words. This is almost as surprising as a certain peom just posted my a certain close friend of yours. I never knew you two had it in you. But, because nothing's perfect, I have to say that this line:"A memory I can’t suppress, so far from divine"is a forced rhyme. That's the only problem I could find, and it's otherwise very well-written. I made me, brace yourself, understand women a little better. I've always been confused how a woman could stay with an abusive guy, but this really bring out the emotion involved in a way that make it less black and white. Good work. |
| DarkGloom 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Not every day I come across smart rhyming. Very good job. Catchy and powerful. Miles |
| Timberly-Lovegood 2005-03-05 ch 1, | WOOT I love it...it's fabulous and you did a good job with the rhythm and rhyming...i'm jealous!I wish i could write as good a poem as that. |
| Autumn's Grace 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Wow. I don't know what else to say but wow. That was so amazing and touching. Nice job, and who cares about the touchy themes? Sometimes those are the best kind to write about. |