It's better then this solitary feeling...than

I can not breath, I try to gasp...cannot

awesome poem.. I love this poem.. I can totally relate... beautiful poem.. I love the last line

Really good poem, you've taken all feelings of a broken hearted girl and placed them graciously into a good, long, and eye catching poem. Great job

Ellen

Very well done, excellent rhyme scheme and flow of words and emotionally powerful. Keep up the great writings!