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| CowGirl1987x2006 2005-03-22 ch 1,   | wow.. beautie-fullalmost reminds me of a book... shattered mirror... but great job! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-22 ch 1, | thats written beautifully and it looks good right there the way it is too! awesome! |
| RonCor 2005-03-17 ch 1, | i love you, lol, i havnt felt like i could relate to a person in a long time, but i do now, the way you conveyyourself, the way your words flow, just so incredible, you are incredible, great job, but im blabbering on, c ya yours trullyroncor |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-12 ch 1, | wow.. that is onw of the most beautiful thigns i have ever read |
| cherryflavoredgrape 2005-03-12 ch 1, | This is beautiful! So much emotion put into this and the words just make a vivid image pop out of the scream. I gotta give you props for that! You're a very talented writer! Keep it up! Oh and thanks for your reviews! |
| Serendipitous Passage 2005-03-12 ch 1, | Wow. The stanza breaks work perfectly with your ideas. This sent shivers down my spine. Beautifully writtin. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor. |
| Beautifula 2005-03-06 ch 1, | Beautiful. Truly beautiful, I dunno why but they comparison using a rose, I just found that really nice. |
| unperfect blood 2005-03-06 ch 1, | A poem that has the same story that has become all to common. It's a pitty that so many good relationships fall to pieces even though one out of the couple works so hard to please the other. Still you wrote this poem and it turned out beautifully. "So fragile was that which was left broken" those words i know to painfully close but to be able to express the feelings of such a bitter thing with such elegance is a gift, a gift that you have and that i wish to see and hear more of. Keep writing kayla! |
| poetic abortion 2005-03-05 ch 1, | ;^; This was so powerful. I am sitting here crying as I read this over. Breath taking, beautiful. Every word holds so much power. So much emotion that I am left crying at the end. *adds to favorite stories lists* I am amzed by this. The whole thing is written so well, I have felt this so often have wanted to just end it all and you have written it with such a strong but meloncholic voice. ;^; Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. !~* Noelle *~! |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-03-05 ch 1, | very nicely done. m |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-05 ch 1, | This was rather good. |