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| Darlingdeath 2005-03-13 ch 1,   | Oh, I like it... well written!! |
| Nyte Shade 2005-03-05 ch 1, | Great story i just wish it was a little bit longer...you could have stretched it for at least 3 chapters by going into a little more details or if it was a true story by embelishing it a little bit but it was really good |