What lies in darkness could also come to light. What is left behind and forgotten can be taken up again and remembered. If something or someone was or is apart of you they will never leave 67

Excellent poem!

Great job!

I like this one, such imagery, nice picture drawn.

I like the "broken moment" - its a nice saying. I love your angst - Its all a bit light but still you get that tinge of strong pain at the same time.

Wow...that was really cool how you chose to express this topic. Keep on going!

awesome

I love the imagery, especially the ripples and the grains of sand. A lovely poem

an interesting thought. very good flow and format, the way it all seems to curve together and make sense. ... i rather enjoyed it. nice care and much love

Wow, that can apply to lots of things...it was wonderful. Loved the ending especailly.

Jaded,SwimmerGirl

Nice choice of words, beautiful images. I really like : thank you.

Wow...how vivid and beautiful...I love the use of all the metaphors, and the first stanza was the best. It really drew you in.

Now, for other news...I couldn't figure out how to post a comment on the link to your drawings (me and technology)...0.o You, my friend, are a DISGUSTINGLY good artist. Your pictures are beautiful! I was in awe...

Keep writing and drawing!

Always, saeo

this is amazingly powerful, and i luv the imagery. wow! great job!

very nice... I liked this

nice poem, well written, good imagry and flows nicely. good work

This flowed so well and the meaning to it...every word was extremely powerful. Filled with such sadness you can't help but feel a small ache in your heart. :( Great job! Keep it up. - Beautiful poem, spiritual but also romantic.

!* Noelle *!