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| ayadora 2005-12-19 ch 1,   | Hm...imagery...good. ARe you having trouble with spacing too? |
| hey maria 2005-11-29 ch 1, | Yes, I've noticed that about fog too. Every time it's really foggy, I drive myself crazy trying to immerse myself in it but it doesn't work. Darn thing. Lovely poem; I especially liked the lines "It is only a blurred vision/Of passing trees/Branches melding into one and other/Creating a brown blur/Against the blue backdrop/Like a smeared canvas." Your poems have great imagery. |