Reviews for In the Blink of an Eye

DarkSideCookie
2005-10-12
ch 1,

I'm supposed to be reviewing stories on this site for a class of mine and trying to give advice on how to make the story better and stuff like that, but I have got to say, this story is by far one of the best I have ever read on this site, It reminds me a lot of Dracula and how the whole book was written in diary and letter form and the opening line is the best part. It just makes you want to read the story. Great Job! BYES!

Nadja the Weird
2005-03-05
ch 1,

Scary. To be too afraid to sleep, too afraid to blink. You did an excellent job of recreating the fear and confusion of the narrator. I like your style.

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