This was trueley awsome! it was a nice change from your usual poems, and I happen to think the nore rated R the better.! keep it up

wow, this is definately different and original! nice work!

holy **. i bow down to the power and intensity of your vulgarity!! i bow and i worship! *makes plans to steal poem*

did you post this before.. i remember reading something similiar... nicely written

Woah...angry...(justifiably (sp?) so, I think). . .but worded well, so much better than the average "RAR I AM ANGRY AND THEREFORE YOU SHALL READ MY ALMOST PROSE AND CALL IT BEAUTIFUL POETRY DARN YOU!" that comes up at this site so often...I think its truly a sign of your talent that you can take something so violent and...well...r rated and make it poetry, give it feeling, make me unexplainably angry...

Wow . . . that was something else. Sounds like you're a lil mad Kasey, are ya mad? :P It's so different from your other stuff, it's angry and dark and just very edgy . . . I like it. Lol, blasting people through song is most fun (smiles devilishly). Keep it up! Makes most entertaining writing!

DAMN!You were really ** at that Jodi girl! Can't say I blame you."Touch it once,

it's only skin

Lick it twice;

forgiven sin

Suck it three times,

maybe four

Shut your hole

you ** **"LOL! LOVE IT! You write so well, and so smoothly! Ever since the first line, I became hooked (I think anyone would, with a powerful line like THAT one as the first).Good job, and I hope your boyfriend will see things like you do. Try talking to him about it and tell him how you feel about "Jodi". He should understand.~*Crazy Baiko*~

It's dark and weird...but I like it lots!! Put more up soon!!~K