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Reviews For: the night falling

Eagle Seance
2005-03-26
ch 1,
uh, i think you should have won. beautifully written. i love how you've written the topic (nightfall).
lambheadluver
2005-03-18
ch 1,
I still say it was rigged and you should have won. Do you realize that almost NO ONE in school likes the winner?!??! Ok, anyway, the poem was great, as I said before, it paints a good visual picture. Nice imagery.
mizu no kokoro
2005-03-10
ch 1,
wow, what vivid imagery~~ awesome job, also, maybe you can fix the formatting, there seems to be some upload error^^ Good job anyways~~

keep writing~
Chole Asterion
2005-03-10
ch 1,
A very beautiful poem filled with equally beautiful imagery and wording. I felt I was outside watching the sky as I read this. Great job!
Summerdazed
2005-03-05
ch 1,
that was really beautiful. it's not related but this actually reminded me of a chinese song i heard on tv yesterday titled 'following the moon' :O)

=summerdazed=
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