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| wennifer 2007-04-12 ch 1,   | wow the rythym is incredible..the flow too...the lines are short but it really works...^^ |
| wheyz 2005-09-11 ch 1, | This is really good. I like the rhythm.My favorite part, I suppose, was the rhyme of 'lies' and 'eyes'. I'm not sure what struck me as so good about that, but I enjoyed it. :-) I hope to see more from you. |
| kimmie 2005-03-30 ch 1, | lol nice beat |
| killab 2005-03-29 ch 1, | nice...i mean nice as in nice story^^hehe |
| jenny 2005-03-17 ch 1, | cool kinda sad but yeah i like it could u finish ur other story i wanna know wat happen next^^; |
| sam the bear 2005-03-12 ch 1, | It's good!! |