Good ending! I wonder how Logan killed the King, though. Guess I'm going to have to check out the rewrite to see if you explain it in there and a sequel would be cool. And I'll check out your other story, Expect the Unexpected, whenever I can. Until next time, chickie!

AH! Logan's the new King? What, did he like have a showdown with the King that pretty much made him end up the new Vampire King? Now I'm going to read the last chapter and be both sad and happy that I'm done reading this story!

YAY! SHE ADMITTED SHE LOVES HIM! FINALLY! TOOK HER LONG ENOUGH! Now what, is the only question, their love is forbidden so guess I'm going to have to read!

God, Alana's stupid and Logan's all sad! Just admit you love him, you stupid girl and get on with the forbidden love affair stuff!

Do I need to repeat myself? I guess I do, Bryan's an ass.

Wow, Bryan's an ass. And boy is Logan stubborn! He and Alana make the perfect couple! Wonder if it was the King that caught them, guess I'm going to have to read!

So we meet the heartbreaker and his name is Bryan and apparently he's a vampire so something must've happened. Hopefully it will be explained in the next chapter.

So Alana's gotten her heart broken. That would explain a lot. She's running from love pretty much out of fear of getting her heart broken again. This is what happens when you get close with characters in stories, you start psychologically evaluating them! Which I love to do so on to the next chapter and something tells me it's going to be mushy!

I hate those dreams where you think they're done but they continue! That's never happened to me before but I've heard about them. And I laughed so hard at the song you chose! It's the perfect song for her to sing in her dream right now! Next chapter, here I come!

Yuck. Still, that was nice of Logan to take her out of the dungeons. If that isn't proof enough that he loves her, then I don't know what is!

Alana is sure stubborn, that I knew before, but now it's her stubborness that might get her killed. Hopefully, Logan will get her out of there and away from all the vampires! Next chapter, please!

AH! LOGAN'S GOING TO DIE! OR RATHER, HE'S GOING TO RUN AWAY WITH ALANA & KIND OF SORT OF LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER, OR AT LEAST I HOPE SO! NEXT CHAPTER NOW!

* makes dramatic sigh* star crossed lovers! How brilliant! Logan has everything at stake now, hehe stake, and Alana's more confused than ever by her hormones but when aren't we? On to the next chapter I go!

Why, hello, Mr. Jacob Black, are you taking off your shirt again because you know your abs are just as hot as this chapter?! When will either of them wake up and smell the roses? They are into each other and are being too damn stubborn to admit it! Hopefully soon that will all change. Maybe in the next chapter... I'm so addicted! hehe, Kelly Clarkson song!

Now that's sexual tension! And he tells her that he loves her! Does happy dance! And she can't deny that she's totally into him. I mean, who wouldn't? Vampires are SEXY! Need to read more!