So, so sad. Yet so very wonderful. You make me want to join fictionpress, my dear Masako. I didn't know this story was out as well! But I am very glad to see it. Good luck...I am always bound to your writings.

Khazia*~

I like this as much as I like Moonshade! They're both awesome! I love the way you incorperated the song in this one, too! I'll be looking for the nexr chapter! :)

I am your humble reader, and I state that you are an amazing writer. If you ever write a novel you must let me know! Wonderful, wonderful job Masako Moonshade. Beautifully written. Very vivid, and the song fits nicely.

Sweetness! totally awesome... I very much liked this story/song thing. I think you should write (if you have not already written) more about this... Great job, very interesting.

Wow! This is a great story! Oh, yea, would you check out my story? It's called, Sokato: Green Police Officer.