|Reviews for Revision|
| frantic writer 3/6/05 . chapter 1
Lovely. I could relate to it.
| Mynix 3/6/05 . chapter 1
Well done.. I loved it :)
| nick-wordsmith 3/6/05 . chapter 1
I like this- I think it presents an interesting idea in a brief but poetic (who would have guessed?) way. However, I'm guessing the format of this got stuffed up, because as a single block it's very gluggy.
Stones decay, words lastNick