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| Reviews for Death Giver |
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  Kutless 3/25/05 . chapter 4 u say its bad? i say its good. i love this story and its good. no other way 2 describe it. its just good. really good. |
 Lauderdale 3/24/05 . chapter 4Hey ... come on now, don't put yourself down. Inspiration's hard to come by. And anyway, you don't need it because this chapter was good. -sigh- Poor Trinity. Ah well at least she got her Starbucks. That's all that matters, right? Just kidding. I like how much she cares for her sister. It's sweet. Please keep updating this story. |
| JojoAnn 3/24/05 . chapter 4 Actually it wasn't bad at all. The only part that bothered me was SHE DIDN'T MAKE IT! Grr..lol. You're really good at writing though so don't stop. |
| Lauderdale 3/10/05 . chapter 3 You seem to know where you're going with it, and it's very good, so just keep doing what you're doing. |
| I Am NOT a Robotic Snob 3/10/05 . chapter 3 This was great! Please Continue! |
| account not in use 3/10/05 . chapter 3 Such an amazing chapter...I can't WAIT until the next part. |
| Demena 3/10/05 . chapter 3 wow. i really really like it. very good. |
| Lauderdale 3/7/05 . chapter 2 Please take as much time as you need to make this story the best you can! I want to see where you take this, I really do. Just don't keep us waiting too long. ;D You know, it's funny, when Dominic said he was 'death' and picked the flower, I thought it was going to curl up and go black or something when he blew on it. Lol. |
| account not in use 3/7/05 . chapter 2 You mkae it very realistic and draw a person in...I love the way you express Trinity's emotions and the way she blew up at Dominic was exactly how you'd think it would happen. So many authors sort of go the magical character route, making them totally accepting if someone asked them a question like that. Great job. :) |
| JojoAnn 3/6/05 . chapter 1 This is an interesting story. Kepp going with it. |
| account not in use 3/6/05 . chapter 1 Damn cliffies. I hope to see more very, very soon. One of the best pieces of fiction I've ever read. Right in the top three. Awesome job, not to short or to long and you kept my attention to the very end. |
| Lauderdale 3/6/05 . chapter 1 Cool start! My least favorite part was your description of Heaven because it slowed the story down a little, but other than that, I loved your characters. I thought that Trinity's little sister buying the pink roses was beautiful. Can't wait to read more about Dominic especially. Argh I hate cliffhangers. xP |
