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| magicbubble 2005-03-27 ch 1, | The eagle part is really nice! |
| spiffiness 2005-03-16 ch 1, | Perhaps not all poetry written needs to be beautiful. Sometimes, yea, not all poetry needs the extravagant vocabulary and false tones. They just seem a little overdressed, don't they? Maybe the simplest haiku can be the most moving couplet to a certain somebody. |
| Nanashiko 2005-03-12 ch 1, | Yo Titus! Heyy. Not bad...simple yet has so much meaning. "When you learn/To set free on ink and paper/You will write/Such beautiful/Poetry." I love those lines! Oh have I told you I got an FP account? =P -Val/Nanashiko |
| Reuben;p 2005-03-11 ch 1, | Titus ;p, you have such a good expressing ability, from feelings to words. hahax i've been wanting to write something like this and the one before, because we had a same emotion yes. but i didn't or did i? i do not remember. hahax. good stuff from you. and do not look so lowly on yourself anymore. hahax;p |