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magicbubble
2005-03-27
ch 1,
The eagle part is really nice!
spiffiness
2005-03-16
ch 1,
Perhaps not all poetry written needs to be beautiful.

Sometimes, yea, not all poetry needs the extravagant vocabulary and false tones. They just seem a little overdressed, don't they?

Maybe the simplest haiku can be the most moving couplet to a certain somebody.
Nanashiko
2005-03-12
ch 1,
Yo Titus!

Heyy. Not bad...simple yet has so much meaning.

"When you learn/To set free on ink and paper/You will write/Such beautiful/Poetry."

I love those lines!

Oh have I told you I got an FP account? =P

-Val/Nanashiko
Reuben;p
2005-03-11
ch 1,
Titus ;p, you have such a good expressing ability, from feelings to words. hahax i've been wanting to write something like this and the one before, because we had a same emotion yes. but i didn't or did i? i do not remember. hahax. good stuff from you. and do not look so lowly on yourself anymore. hahax;p
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